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Azaer0831 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I found you because of TFM. I loved mirror's cycle and I like the little epilogue you made. It feels unfinished, though. 
For example: You left their surprise at discovering Daniel's change, but what next? It would have been nice to see an extra few pages listing a bit more.

I'm not saying you should have a whole other story for it, but it would've been nice for it to be complete.
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MentalCrash Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, what's TFM?

And well, that'd be a different study of a character, with Daniel/Danielle the important thing was how he managed as he was changing, I might do a few single pages to show some of her future but I think that's better instead of making a sequel or something like that.
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Azaer0831 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
TransformingMorpher
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MentalCrash Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oooh, yeah, the videos
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Azaer0831 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your work as an artist.
I don't mean to sound like a critic... I just read a lot of stories.
Sometimes I'll write stuff too, but as an avid lover of good writing, I hate cliff hangers.
I love the way you used pictures for dialogue and the art was good, but that one thing irks me.
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MentalCrash Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Eh, I don't mind critique if it's supposed to help

But I really feel like it's better to leave her story in the air, my current TG comic will show more of the process of adaptation since the protagonist genitalia is the first thing to transform, and he also has to attend school while the rest of his body changes over the year
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Azaer0831 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've read some. I like where you're going with this one too so far.
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Azaer0831 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...
That sounded a lot better in my head
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ToshidoGamekaze Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You do got a pretty nice gallery. although it's been a good while since i've used Paint Tool SAI, but hopefully that tutorial could help me to improve my skill a bit more better.
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MentalCrash Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, thank you, and always glad to help, I feel like I'm not the right person to give out anatomy tricks but I can help with anything coloring related.
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